Errrr...critique?....I'm rubbish at critiquing and this is my 1st DA critique so be nice ...
Drawing is great, nice lines, original style, characters are nicely proportioned (no overlarge or tiny limbs), realistic expressions and posing; relays Chief and Emily's character and the dynamics of their relationship - so really good drawing.
Background story...very intriguing.. Emily sounds like a dangerous woman and that's always provocative in a story because you're always questioning their intentions. And who wouldn't want a nightly visit from Emily especially when it means a break from their reality of a devastated post-apocolyptic world. I'd definitely like to read this if you turn this into a comic or even one of your visual novels